In this modern era, the fast and stress lifestyle of people is having negative impact on their relationships. People nowadays have less time to spend with their families as they have busy routines which leads to increase in stress. In my option, I agree to a certain extent that the current lifestyle is effecting the relationships among the families and the following essay will discuss this in details.
People are travelling to cities/towns from countryside for better job and educational opportunities which leads to increase in travel time which has impacted the personal health of individuals. They are spending more of their time in travelling rather than having quality time with families which helps them in keeps happy and motivated.High travel time along with increase in traffic leads to adverse health conditions of individual.
Not just travelling there could be also other reasons like current job satisfaction and employment opportunities which could lead to increase in stress among individuals. Many companies have set up high targets for their employees to achieve which in turn leads to increase in amount of time spend in their professional lives rather than contributing to personal life.As the job opportunities are minimal students these days are more concerned and stressed about their grades instead of domain knowledge and skills.
In conclusion, I personally agree that the fast and stressful lifestyle of individuals are impacting their families and therefore of the opinion that government should take actions in developing more job opportunities along with advance education .In addition, government authorities should also be focusing on the personal and skill development cells where individuals can spend time and feel motivated and encouraged and ultimately have positive engagement with their families. Furthermore, increase in job opportunities will have a feeling of contentment among individuals so that they can focus more on their skills instead of just getting grades.
- We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of 84
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51612903226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97914359608 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509677419355 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.243562327 49.4020404114 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.0 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4444444444 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134340530155 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767525677463 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706879424799 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974979102448 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082706597599 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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