Governments all around the world are in charge of decision making because of the authority they have. There are some people who believe that government should not spend too much money for exploring outer space. However, in my opinion, I believe that it is irrelevant for the leaders to spend such humongous amount given that these funds can be channeled to more relevant things. In this essay I will discuss how the huge amounts of cash used for space exploration can be used to make the world a better place.
To begin with, it is better the authorities use money for humanitarian purposes rather than using such huge amount for outer space exploration. For instance, the government made a very good decision when they helped the internally displaced people of Haiti, and the IDP’s received aids such as food and shelter;many lives were saved. Similarly, the governments around the world decided to manufacture vaccines after the Covid-19 pandemic struck in order to eliminate the virus. In summary, the authorities should consider using such large amount of cash for humanitarian purposes before outer space exploration.
To continue, the government should not spend too much money in exploring outer space as these funds are required to improve infrastructure in the society. For example, due to the lack of school in northern Nigeria, the government has built schools for their children because education is key. In addition, new facilities for various kinds of sports have been built by the government in various countries. This has encouraged sports globally. Therefore, given that leaders spend too much money on space exploration, it is best the funds are used to develop our infrastructure.
To conclude, I have discussed how the huge amounts of cash used for space exploration can be used to make the world a better place.
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- Write a paragraph of about 150 words about the values of books 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11258278146 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75409117513 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4276822647 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291332625106 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130123200638 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178565346852 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188476823009 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100838954479 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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