Some people believe that a great difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial. Do you think the advantages of a greater difference in age between them outweigh the disadvantages?
It is considered by many individuals that delay in parenthood brings several benefits to parents and their children. In my opinion, a huge age gap among parents and a child has considerable advantages than its drawbacks.
A most significant advantage of a big age difference among them is that parents can look after a child in a better way. It happens because parents became more mature by that time due to several life experiences, so it helps them to rear a child. Another positive aspect, parents can bear a child’s upbringing expenses without any financial hardships. As we know, in late of their career, parent’s remuneration is more as comparison to the income of their early career. Hence, it is convenient for them to pay an exorbitant amount of high school fees and other expenses of a child.
However, there are certainly some downsides to this huge age difference. One drawback is that bonding among parents and children are weak and unstable due to a huge age difference. Parents in their late 30’s prefer to spend most of their time at home and avoid going out, but a child always wants to spend most of their time out. This establishes a vulnerable relationship among them because of their different preferences. Another negative aspect is that a large age difference implies a bigger generation gap which causes differences in opinions and ideologies leading to conflicts.
In conclusion, although huge age difference in parents and children have a few drawbacks, it can avoid by mutual understanding. Hence, I believe that benefits outweigh its drawbacks due to the aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...eer, parent's remuneration is more as comparison to the income of their early...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11610486891 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02914531833 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.5185864275 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250913746848 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947585577418 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057475330704 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164159636119 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253423798282 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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