Some people believe that handwriting is no longer useful in the modern world and should not be taught in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some believe that it would be a waste of time and unimportant to hone handwriting skill, especially when they will be typing instead of writing for the entire life. In my opinion, everyone should know the significance of handwriting skill even in the modern time.
To begin with, the modern method of writing is not everywhere available and internet is also not easily accessible in small towns, there are many drawbacks of making toddler to commence their learning with modern technologies such as computer, laptop, table, typewriter for instance, usage of spectacles in early age may result in major eye sight problem and is dangerous, headache which can eventually lead to migraine, back pain and many ailments. Furthermore, good handwriting is vital because, when children learn to write clearly and concisely, they also learn how to express themselves properly to exemplify, a person who puts all their emotions on a paper for their loved ones and that receiver could feel their touch and sentiments by reading their handwritten letter. Apart from this it improves academic performance and focus as well as the one who has good handwriting would have higher grade. What’s more it aids to remember significant things for example, notes, to-do list.
On the contrary, it is no longer required to master handwriting skill because due to modern technology everything that once was handwritten is now replaced by typing. Moreover, universities, schools, colleges are solely dependent on computers. To illustrate, students would prefer taking exams online as it would save their time and money for traveling and in addition to that people struggling from bad handwriting would worry less as the computer-based examinations would give accurate results.
To recapitulate, albeit modern methods surely outweigh handwritten methods it is equally important to learn handwriting skills as it broadens the mind of individuals and makes one more creative and active in arts as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...tacles in early age may result in major eye sight problem and is dangerous, headache whic...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... handwritten is now replaced by typing. Moreover universities, schools, colleges are sol...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...g from bad handwriting would worry less as the computer-based examinations would g...
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Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to handwrite'.
Suggestion: to handwrite
...ethods it is equally important to learn handwriting skills as it broadens the mind of indiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31847133758 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87274562936 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640127388535 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.200530034 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149405684918 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618001011906 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463958689235 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930514216132 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491255059941 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.