Some people prefer to spend their life doing the same thing and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
As it is said, change is constant and nothing remains the same. Although, few people opt to persist the same thing and resist change, wherein others adopt and endure change briskly. This essay will further discuss both sides of coin.
First and foremost, nothing is permanent in life. In order to live a better life, one has to adopt change in every way. Not only one should take career under consideration but should also the things that would prosper their life. Furthermore, if someone does not have will to try something new then they would be behind the world and obviously they would have to continue with their monotonous routine. To exemplify, A fashion designer will not be successful if they don’t understand and walk with the trend and design medieval products. Therefore, to equally go a long way and survive one has explore new things and adapt change. The leading cause is lack of awareness and rigidity.
However, some argue that it makes no difference to change thing to get exposure and they are habituated and comfortable with the same things. Albeit, they somewhere know that they are wrong yet they continue their mind-numbing routine. For instance, a senior citizen who is not aware of a newspaper available on mobile application would not prefer using new technologies also would not prefer to use the same even though it is effortless. What’s more, it could be said that these are the reasons due to which people resist change.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, a person must adapt change to live freely and independently. Wherein, it shows us that to be successful one should leave conserve mind behind and opt to be receptive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'explored'.
Suggestion: explored
...ually go a long way and survive one has explore new things and adapt change. The leadin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90070921986 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5835858315 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3829269872 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223373247727 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710782574498 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588696886347 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139648702006 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698901118705 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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