Without any doubt, society is divided in to two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue as physical health is more important than emotional well-being. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion of this topic, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour. First of all, if physical health of one person is not well there could have a chance of morbidity and early mortality. Besides that, physical inactivity leads to the obesity, diabetic and chronic diseases such as cancer. For example, in light of the announcement of WHO, sharp increase of in percentage of over-weight and diabetic in developed nations like America and Europe. Second point is that the children are addicted to electronic media so that they do not get the time to burn their calories. Consequences of this is unimaginable in this era.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, first point is that hormones created in bodies to enjoy the life is not only based in physical appearances but also depends on health as well. For instances, celebrities in entertainment field have good physical health and emotional maturity, OSCAR AWARD winner Will Smith is the best person to mention here. Apart from this, dietary control and fitness are also mutually related to the emotional maturity.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, both are equally important. Although, balanced diet and physical exercise is crucial to keep the individual to be happy and healthy to live longer in this planet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: Whom
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04379562044 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71652512678 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6705446426 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144998321416 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476555471464 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583106314228 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917818841031 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428799397178 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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