Some people believe that improve public health should increase the number of sports facilities; others believe that it has little effects and need other measures to improve it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Leading a healthy life has become a priority nowadays for people. Some people say that incorporation of more sports facilities is the effective method to improve public health while others opine that other important measures are required to achieve better health and fitness among people. I will discuss both opinions before giving my opinion.
It is true that sports facilities are quite beneficial for people to lead a healthy lifestyle. These sports centers help them indulge in several physical activities which further makes their body active and fit. This facility not only brings freshness in obese lifestyle, but also improves person’s mental health. If wide range of sports activities like gyms, swimming pool and playgrounds are available, then people will be leading more active lifestyle in spite of living sedentary life at home by playing virtual games and watching Tv. However, these facilities are expensive for middle class people to get its benefits on a regular basis.
On the other side, having numerous physical fitness clubs will not help to improve public health in a considerable way. There are other efficient methods that need to be done for improving overall health. There should be health campaigns done by the government to inform the public about the advantages of leading a healthy lifestyle. For instance, the importance of a healthy diet and doing exercises at home like cardio could be shown to people by arranging more inspiring programs and shows by the media. The campaigns should be well prepared, informative and implemented thoroughly. As a result, they can simply become more enthusiastic without paying extra bucks on their own.
In conclusion, I personally believe that no doubt these sports facilities are a boon to our society but the government should educate and encourage people to live a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a considerable way" with adverb for "considerable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... will not help to improve public health in a considerable way. There are other efficient methods that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27852348993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65836418491 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0480219892 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31648704145 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105809929323 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943327362802 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1969698617 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956292696039 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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