Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people opine that they should accept predicaments while others think they should make endeavors to better such situations. From my perspective, people who improve difficult circumstances would benefit their community while those who accept them is unlikely to benefit others.
On the one hand, acceptance of an uneasy situation can change people’s perception of the uneasy situation positively. For example, when people accept overworking, they would also consider the stress of overworking as normal. Then, they would change their perception of the situation from bad to good. However, people who accept bad situations can adversely affect their friends and family. For example, the employee who accepts overworking would inadvertently distance himself from his family both physically and mentally. This is because he allocates most of his time to work already, which leaves little time left for familial bonds.
On the other hand, people who improve uneasy circumstances can bring good influence not only to themselves but also to others. For example, a person who although originated from a difficult background but studied diligently and became successful would be admired by normal people. This, in turn, would inspire them to strive to either become successful or achieve their dreams. Thus, people who improve uneasy circumstances are beneficial to not only themselves but also to the society.
To conclude, when facing a difficult situation, people should try to improve it as they would benefit the society. Although people who accept a bad situation would benefit themselves as their perception of the circumstance is positive, however, this approach to difficult situations is unlikely to benefit the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54716981132 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83520561625 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.116387834 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19193186312 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782399272637 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581191630626 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127305574213 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435049003716 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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