Some people believe that it is good for children to do chores. Others, however, say that children should not be asked to do household tasks. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is thought that housework brings many benefits to children. Other people, however, opine that household tasks are not the youngsters’ business. Both approaches are beneficial but personally, I agree with the first group.
On the one hand, housework has some following downsides to the teenagers. Firstly, it is clear that children are not competent enough to do the chores. For example, if a five-year-old child washes knives, he could accidentally cut himself. Secondly, taking up time is also a drawback of housework. Children, these days, are more and more busy with plenty of extra classes and homework. They don’t have enough time to relax, to entertain themselves. If parents asked them to do chores, I am not optimistic that the youngsters could have time for doing the chores. For these reasons, children should not be required to do the chores.
On the other hand, it is virtual that children can be brought many benefits from household tasks. Children can become self-reliant by doing housework. To be more specific, if parents let their child carry out housework, the child will able to handle his life when he lives without his parents as he accustomed to it. Moreover, not only helps children be self-governing but also teaches children responsibility. For instance, a child doing housework frequently will know how his actions and will lend his mother a hand with dishes, will know how to act when going to his friends’ houses. To sum up, housework is one of the crucial things for children to grow up.
In my view, while some disadvantages of carrying out chores. It seems to me that it is better if children do household chores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01438848921 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89614590346 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1252972599 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3684210526 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327984321823 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113307632448 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101736415315 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204989596838 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717398784778 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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