We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem no closer to feeling happy in their lives. Discuss.
technology has brought us plenty of benefits in many fields especially in communication. Thanks to the development of technology, our life is more and more convenient than before. however, many people opine that this invention also has some negative effects on mankind.
On the one hand, the invention of technology has offered us various chances to be better, notably in getting closer to others. To be more specific, through the internet, we can talk together by chatting or even voice. Besides, we also can meet people on video without traveling for a long way. Moreover, technology also makes relationships between people and people, called an online relationship. through that, we can open our minds by absorbing new cultures, traditions of a variety of countries. For example, if we have a Korean friend online, we can learn the cuisine of that country such as kimchi, tokbokki, etc. To sum up, technology is a remarkable brainchild of human beings.
On the other hand, a great deal of people argues that technology makes them feel no longer happy in their lives for some following reasons. Firstly, using technology too much can lead to less face-to-face interaction. For instance, some youngsters can communicate with each other very confidently on the social online network, they, however, cannot stand talking to others in real life. Secondly, this invention also harms our health. To be more clear, many of us become addicted to technology, thus, we don't have any outdoor activities or exercises. As a consequence, we are more likely to face diseases like obesity, autism. For these reasons, technology has helped us keep in touch, though, it also has many downsides.
In conclusion, everything has two sides and technology is not an exception. technology's benefits will be brought into play if we use it in the right ways and right purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12786885246 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86731387314 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2615321604 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3157894737 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216472369668 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635669528866 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464657260295 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127439177366 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294824837981 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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