A large number of people think that nowadays women should not work hard to earn their living; they should spend more time in caring for their families.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many people these days opine that females should stay at home instead of earning their living. while I agree that women should look after her family’">family’s well-being, I believe that there are also some upsides of letting them toil away to earn their living.
On the one hand, I agree that maintaining the family’">family’s happiness is female’ the duty of priority. firstly, the constitution of females is appropriate for housework. For example, some household chores demand competence, skillfulness, thus, I am optimistic that the majority of women can carry out them perfectly. secondly, the constitution of females cannot stand working hard in social environment. To be more specific, women cannot work as a pilot because of their weaker health compare to that of men. To sum up, females had better stay at home and take care for their families.
Nevertheless, I believe that women also should work in society for some reasons. firstly, letting women work to earn their living is a way to express the equality between men and women. To be more specific, nowadays, there are more and more women who hold important position in society, it means that, if men can do it, women, too. secondly, earning a living helps female be braver and more powerful. Through doing their work, they can enhance their skills of overcoming thick and thin, solving problems easily and quickly. For these reasons, I opine that women not only should spend time for their families but also should go out to work for their living.
In brief, while maintaining happiness of the family is an important duty of women, I believe that they also should try to do some jobs to gain experiences as well as skills for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in brief, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1149825784 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5091796136 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533101045296 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4987999808 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350253776638 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12571230469 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079125978637 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210229215357 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937194716471 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.