Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people think that it is completely fine sharing details related to technological investigation, trade and the education system with outside world. However, others feel that only trivial facts should be shared openly. In my opinion, basic details related to some particular areas can be shared with public but, the key facts should not be published publicly. In this essay, I will give further examples and reasons.
First of all, data which has not much significance to particular technology research, business, and education system might be shared with outside world, because it has no confidential material. Information about a research carried out on an animal, for instance, details of outcome can be shared, but they should keep research steps confidential. Because, if we share the procedure of investigation with common people then they could try it on humans.
On the other hand, many argue that the confidential documents should not be leaked, because it contains vital facts related to the specific technological research, business deals, and academic world. To exemplify, the announcements related to a nuclear plant setup, government could tell about the start date of the nuclear plant setup, but keep the site confidential and secured. Because, if they share the location details freely, there is possibility that terrorists may attack the site. Additionally, in case, anyone leaks critical information then people could copy research ideas which leads to huge financial loss.
Also, there are many other reasons, which could be responsible to keep the information secret. Some factual data contains user’s personal details, which is not supposed to share with outside people, in case, it is shared freely, it can break the code of ethics of any company. Similarly, user’s data which is not important, can be shared with public.
In conclusion, the investigation authorities should not share important facts freely due to criticality and keep it confidential whereas, details which has less significance, can be shared with outside world because it does not contain any important information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47272727273 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89424240838 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524242424242 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1170874896 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.4 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253158401494 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927433588042 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396737607815 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152872040986 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126847732291 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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