Some people believe that money is the best gift for teenagers while others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
One of the remarkable trends of today's world is an enormous upsurge in the number of people believing that cash is the most suitable present for youngers while others oppose it by saying that other things should be given to them in the place of money. In my opinion, I agree with the previous point of view of giving funds to young ones.
On the one hand, Giving cash is the best option which will help them to get what they want because if we specified a certain gift that will ruin their ambition of fulfilling their needs. It can not only contribute to managing their needs but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016 indicate that 60% of students preferred to receive money as a present to buy useful things namely; electrical gadgets, books, and other accessories. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this viewpoint.
On the other hand, many people believe that teens are not mature enough to use money wisely. They are vulnerable as it may spoil them. Also, they may be attracted to some disgraced activities of taking drugs, joining gangs, and do other unethical practices that can create a threat to their future ending up in jail. Therefore, giving fortune as a gift may be dangerous for their lives.
To conclude providing money as a present should be controlled and monitored at the same time as the benefits are too great to ignore at the same time we have to be preconscious for the threats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63003663004 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42926470361 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7046555741 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235283015403 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789334470921 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591027810715 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133734250292 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683130018923 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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