Some people believe that museums and historic sites should be open for free children under 18, do you agree or disagree
As compared to the past decade there has been a drastic decline in people visiting historic places or museums. Some people are of the view that such places should be made free to visit, particularly for young visitors. I completely agree to this phenomenon, I shall discuss the topic in details and give valid arguments about my stance with examples.
To begin with, the utmost benefit of making entrance fees free of charge is learning factor of young generation. By making zero fees, children will compel their parents to visit these places since it got no charge, consequently by more visits similarly parents would be contended to invest their time, feeling confident that their kids would learn something, that too with no cost. People are more comfortable visiting places where no amount is involved. For instance, in any part of the world if there is a book fair that is free to attend, everyone would rush to attend.
To elucidate it further, free of cost entrance would also be a good decision in longer terms of children growth. By knowing and visiting these places, kids will learn some good lessons out of our ancestor’s stories and would try to replicate in their lives as well. For instance, I made my daughter visited our national museum, where she learnt about our father of the nation, Mr. Muhammad Ali Jinnah. Our tour guide reveal many wonderful aspects of Jinnah’s life. My daughter got so overwhelmed that she kept talking about such characteristics of Jinnah all the way back to home. Thus, visiting these place would leave an influential impact on our kid minds.
To recapitulate the aforementioned arguments, I opine that historical places should be free of cost to visit. In order to encourage people to show our young generation who our ancestors were and what wonderful acts they did for us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to factor'
Suggestion: to factor
...ntrance fees free of charge is learning factor of young generation. By making zero fee...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd what wonderful acts they did for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, similarly, so, thus, well, for instance, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91612903226 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65443692331 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4906095316 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163343348768 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618828305518 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629883066665 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118856200582 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515238687052 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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