1- Some believe that people Should get a job right after school. Others say they should attend university. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
There are two dimensions of this topic, a group of people asserts that students should start working right after their elementary level schooling; whereas, another group believes that it is essential to complete university-level education and then pursue a reasonable job. I shall discuss both perspectives in detail before reaching a final verdict.
To start with, predominantly, young people starting job only after completing their school are more mature and responsible citizens. These people experience on the job challenges and realize that money is hard earned. These workers tend to behave rationally towards money management and utilization. According to the recent survey published by Stanford University, people who start working at the early age are more responsible and have a rational approach towards life.
On the contrary, students who complete their university-level education have the liberty to chose a white collar job and pursue a bright career. Attending university will open up new avenues for them to chose from, as they would be aware of multiple career options instead of having limited education that narrows down their career scope. For instance, a university graduate can opt-in different career paths such as engineering, banking or telecommunication leading to a financially stable future.
To conclude, both approaches have their own significance. In my opinion, completing the university education outweighs early working perspective, owing to its numerous benefits such as reasonable jobs and sound financial future. In the future, it is expected that people would be inclined to complete the higher level of education instead of early jobs as every successful individual has a tremendous amount of credit to be given to their studies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, whereas, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55350553506 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03703711699 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6972896938 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159592340989 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553092596636 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04079081207 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964369022915 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511881316582 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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