Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds whereas the demand for technological personnal have been increasing rapidly in this 21st century. therefore the trend to study subjects like science and mathematics also growing up day by day.In my point of view I do not completely disagree that literature and the history don't have Much value for our society. To begin with, there are many reasons why scientific University subjects matter more than the literature. First of all, academic subjects like physics chemistry and Biology, they have totally specific fields to acquire knowledge. For example a chemistry student can rely on this subject to produce medicine which is otherwise impossible to reach his goal. secondly, due to technological advancement job related to science and mathematics have seen much more demand. students are now much more curious on specific knowledge and scientific experiments. On the other hand, history and literature holds our culture and Society. Consequently, denying on our social heritage results in immoral social lifestyle. Furthermore as a human being the college or university students have the right to know the customs and regulations. what is more,the history provides knowledge about our ancient society and how our forefather overcame different obstacles. To conclude, undoubtedly though literature and history reflects our heritage and Lifestyle, the knowledge gained from Math and scientific practical study of oughtweigh the former in means.
- TOPIC 2: Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view? 61
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 69
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. 11
- Some people think that children would benefit if they attend nursery school before primary school while some people think that children should stay all day with their families. 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, first of all, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 227.0 407.700716846 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56828193833 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91259730129 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647577092511 0.524837075471 123% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8123201199 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.45110844103 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210816998941 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690799171917 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464468844504 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210816998941 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 10.9000537634 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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