Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hobbies are the activities that we love to do in our free time. It could be listening music, doing gardening, playing sports or watching television and every person holds a unique hobby depending upon his personality. Although some people thinks that to make a hobby enjoyable there should be some difficulty level and I completely disagree with them as I think if hobbies would be difficult then they would become a task rather than a hobby.
The major point that supports my disagreement is that hobbies are meant for the personal growth of a person not for a mental challenge . Many people have earned a great names just by following their hobbies. For example, Famous Indian cricketer Sachin tendulkar chose cricket as a hobby since the age of 4. Hobbies are our pass time activities, if we choose hobbies by their difficulty level, we would start hating them instead of enjoying.
Another fact that forces me to disagree with the statement that a hobby is enjoyable if it is difficult. hobbies are the things that we love to do, if we find any thing difficult to do, we would never opt it as our hobby. For example, bicycle riding is easy for someone then he would practice it whole day, but if some one finds cycling difficult he would definitely avoid to try that activity. Hence difficulty level is not the essential element of hobby rather loving factor is an important part of hobby.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the people who believes that to make a hobby enjoyable, there should be some difficulty level. hobbies means passion to do something anytime irrespective of your moods even, thus adding a dificulty level would definitely add a constraint.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86111111111 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62811822865 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565972222222 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7796793577 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295146842574 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106407718676 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859205969042 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197158743206 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705335987479 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.