Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. Do you agree or disagree?
Each era, a new hobby appears, people follow this trend and enjoy it to the maximum, no matter its difficulty. Some people agree that a hobby to be enjoyable, must be hard, others disagree and think there are many alternative hobbies can be done in an easy way.
On one hand, some people agree and believe that difficult hobbies make man excited. First, many activities need to use your body power and effort that's why people enjoy it, in order to use their strength and release all the stress. Second, many people like to go for danger adventures to explore new places, where man couldn't reach them from before. However, some believe that most enjoyable hobby are the extreme activities, such as skydiving, racing cars or climbing mountains, where they can feel the excitement and the pressure. For example, each year number of adventurers climb the highest peak in the world Mount of Everest, which requires a great effort to overpass. In my opinion I agree, to enjoy your hobby it needs to be difficult.
On the other hand, few people think to enjoy your hobby, it can be done in an easiest way without endangering yourself. First, some people like to do easy activities that aid them to stay fit and healthy, such as biking, jogging or swimming. Second, humans these days believe that they can release all their work stress, with less effort through reading books, watch movies or play video games, where they can enjoy doing it from home and feel comfortable. Moreover, several people think that putting your body under pressure, soon you will face health problems and difficulties in your body. For example, one of my friend’s hobby is playing chess, where he prefers to use his brain rather than his body. From my side I disagree, in order to enjoy any hobby, you need to be active and search for a new adventure to be done.
In conclusion, some human beings agree and disagree with the point that a hobby need to be difficult to be enjoyable. In my opinion, hobbies without any hardness won't be excited, you won't feel the pressure and the load, to overtake and enjoy what you are doing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an easy way" with adverb for "easy"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...re many alternative hobbies can be done in an easy way. On one hand, some people agree and ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... need to use your body power and effort thats why people enjoy it, in order to use th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ntures to explore new places, where man couldnt reach them from before. However, some b...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... to enjoy your hobby, it can be done in an easiest way without endangering yoursel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73170731707 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3672920501 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531165311653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6312145744 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480439543799 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164216369885 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149602767847 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335334769614 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743969449409 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.