Some people believe that the radio is more enjoyable and practical than TV. Do you agree?
It is believed by some that compared to TV, radio is more enjoyable and practical. In my opinion, although TV is more popular these days, radio is still doing a great part in entertainment and providing more joyful experience in daily life.
To begin with, if we consider television, which can be defined as the most popular media among common people. The reason for this is because videos are more powerful than verbal or textual messages. Therefore, television's impact on people is much greater than other media. For instance, to report an incident about an emergency situation, television is the best medium because the reporters can broadcast live feed on the location and people can have an idea about what is happening real-time. Moreover, most of the musical shows have become more popular than before because of the artist’s fashions, colourful lighting, and other decorations compared to radio. As a result, people are more attracted to television programs, especially as a family entertainment method.
However, radio has a unique way of interacting with people. Radio allows people to visualize about the content of programs and which gives the listener a chance to enjoy the program in their own way. To explain this more, if we consider a radio commentary program about an exciting sports event, listeners can have vivid imaginations about what is happening in the event right now based on information they are receiving. Although they cannot see what is happening there, they know the actual fact and it is up to them to visualize the event. Moreover, people are spending a considerable amount of time daily for commuting on their personnel vehicles. Radio is the best media for such people to get information because devices with the screen are impossible to use while driving. In addition, talk shows with user interaction are more popular on radio because people can participate in those programs while doing other things without worrying to watch the show.
In conclusion, although television has advantages and entertainment in news reports and other entertainment programs, I believe radio is still giving much more enjoyable experience to the listeners.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is that
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 9, column 487, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
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Line 13, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... enjoyable experience to the listeners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23512747875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8119226182 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526912181303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8064613655 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286059106155 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106568388912 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101903499843 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199954479762 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940425919464 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.