Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion
There are many notions that pupils should not do more assignments at home, while others oppose that excercises are very essential in children learning, i firmly beleive that it is integral aspect of education.
There are many reasons why peope agrue that homework might put more burden for school children and parents. Firstly, Children spend most of their time for leaning in school, so they need time to relax , refresh theirself after leaving school. Doing more excercises at home is the way to put more pressure on children because their brain have to work consecutively without recharging time. As a result, children might be weary in body and mind , easy to get irritable that likely ruin children development. Secondly, Time at home is very precious because it is time that family sit together for sharing stories, thought as the way to strengthen fammily bond. Children might be more isolated with their family that might lead them to be autisim kids easily as result of doing homworks at home.
In spite of aforementioned objections, i support the view that assignments play crucial role in children learning because of a range of merits that it offers. Doing homework at home is the way to help develop the sense of independence in adolescence. Homework encourage children working their tasks alone that help to ameliorate their problem solving skill. Beside, doing assignments at home is one of the best ways for children to reinfore the knowledge they are taught at school that leads to profound understading their lessons. Additionally, some advanced excercises given by their teachers will put children in many challenges that contribute to develop their reseaching skill and enhance their comprehension.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng in school, so they need time to relax , refresh theirself after leaving school....
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Line 7, column 443, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...children might be weary in body and mind , easy to get irritable that likely ruin ...
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Line 11, column 40, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... In spite of aforementioned objections, i support the view that assignments play ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, then, while, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20071684588 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73866481169 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3403117695 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233276318128 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985223887803 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434432682308 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155583163919 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592249704211 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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