Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life. Others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Sports have been an integral part of human lives since the advent of civilisation. Due to this, it is asserted by one section of society that physical activities should be a compulsory part of the school curriculum, whereas others deem that it should be discretionary. This essay will delve deeper into both the opinions followed by my perspective in the ensuant paragraphs.
To begin with, if sporting is made a necessary part of schooling programs, all children can thrive their essential management skills in the coming times because it can inculcate essential life traits in children such as teamwork, competitiveness, leadership skills, time management, and sportsmanship. As a result, pupils can succeed in their future professional lives where this skillfulness is highly appreciated. For example, multinational companies such as, Microsoft and Infosys, prefer to hire those professionals who hold sports background along with vocational degrees.
However, assuming that when competitive sports are not a part of schooling, studious pupils can enhance their cognitive skills more precisely. Since they can invest their precious time in academic preparation, instead of playing games with their peers on the ground. Consequently, they will score good marks which are required to take admission in Ivy league colleges. For instance, a survey conducted in 2018, by United States census bureau, in America, revealed that three among four scholars studying at the Harvard school of business were never a part of any school sports activity.
As far as my opinion is concerned, I firmly believe that whether or not education institutes make it obligatory, children of any age should take part in competitive sports in order to keep themselves physically stronger. Resultantly, their mind will also flourish as they say, 'healthy mind lives in a healthy body.'
To conclude, keeping all the above in view, it can be reiterated that supporting any of the sides entirely is unsurmountable as both the opinions are indispensable. Still, in my assertion, school children should be encouraged to take part in team sports in order to increase their chances of success in this contemporary world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ion is concerned, I firmly believe that whether or not education institutes make it obligatory...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39244186047 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05084543292 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607558139535 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5521309673 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236094747858 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748821953329 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605789535757 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136172837691 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061834101877 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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