Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Today, lots of teenagers find it difficult between getting a job after graduating from high school or continuing studies at university. It is unquestionable that finding a job early has numerous advantages, I still believe that attend at university or college is the better option.
There are several reasons why people believe that students should find a job directly is the better choice. Firstly, if people begin their occupations at the age of 18, they could make money for their own and live independently without their parents' financial support. In fact, many students in western countries is finding their job after graduating from high school. The reason is that most of the inhabitants are supposed the study path is not at all and the life experience is contribute a huge part of their life. Second, people who choose to start their career early instead of going to university or college is more opportunities to gain real experience and exclusive skills for their job to a certain extent. Therefore, it may bring good chance to promotes to higher position such as managers.
on the other hand, I strongly believe that continuing studies at university or college has more advantages than getting a job straight after school. firstly, plenty of employers require high academic degrees to apply for the professional vacancy to ensure that they have the adequate ability for the job. For many high-paying jobs such as statisticians, economists, and medical jobs, a master’s degree is one of the most vital requirements. secondly, today's job market is more competitive and requires qualification so if people have a bachelor's degree or master’s degree can be huge opportunities compared to other applicants. employers would prefer to choose people who have adequate qualifications to work effectively with less time training.
For some of the aboved mention explanations, it seems that students continuing to learn at university or college has more benefits than drawbacks. It is the short way for them to get their dream jobs
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...s to higher position such as managers. on the other hand, I strongly believe that...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
...an getting a job straight after school. firstly, plenty of employers require high acade...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... is one of the most vital requirements. secondly, todays job market is more competitive ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Employers
...rtunities compared to other applicants. employers would prefer to choose people who have ...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...cants. employers would prefer to choose people who have adequate qualifications to wor...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...fectively with less time training. For some of the aboved mention explanations, it seems t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16918429003 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94000394338 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543806646526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6602418614 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.066666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330411112157 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117093302083 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114564141214 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212065337965 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609163176071 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.