Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Developing knowledge skills of children, is always very important subject in family life cycle. Some parents support to learn their kids with their personal supervision at home, others prefer to find out relaible schools to teach them with other students.
Personal training of childeren at home has some benefits such as: more reliability with selective contents through learning materials, empower and focus on his/her interests and capabilities for future personal and professional life like "emphases play piano instead of killing child's time to difficult historical contents". On the other hand, paranets should allocate more time with their children, and need to match their learning materials with official certificates such as diploma for child graduation.
In front of above idea, most of people prefers to attend their children to schools which have expertise and certified knowledge to teach official titles and materials to them. This apporach could inject some capabilities to students like: to be more social and learn how to interact with other children, teachers and also managers of school; also, be prepare for real life with different types of people in universities, work place, street.
As a conclusion, both ways have advantages and disadvantages behind them, especially, when we would like to think for future an important subject like our children. As a father with two kids, I prefere to combine both models together, first, use benefits of normal schools as above mentioning parts and sencond, prepare and teach some specific lessons by trainer or me at home for my lovely babies which do not involve in school materials.
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- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and inc 61
- Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and inc 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... graduation. In front of above idea, most of people prefers to attend their children to sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41923076923 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78477209504 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638461538462 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6316692291 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.125 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255242312603 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116866686383 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246170293352 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163694032177 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338144218543 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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