Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, home schooling has increased significantly. Many argue that the traditional way of education is foremost contribution towards children development while others are in the favour of home teaching. In this essay, we will discuss and compare the benefits for ways of education the outweigh the opinion.
Since 20th Century, people mainly followed the conventional way for children’s learning in the school. It is because the kids learn to be active and smart. Also, children get real life lessons in day-to-day life which helps them to socialise. Additionally, they are nurtured and taken care by their parents and tutors. For instance, the parent as well as teacher can track their child’s development. However, the working parents lack attention on kids which might emotionally affect them.
The home tuition pattern is now mostly adopted by the workaholic parents, as they have a reasonable method to take care of. The child can focus on studying attentively, learning new skills and develop new qualities which can help them grow. But sometimes they lack communication skills as they are grown inbound. For instance, although some students become bright, they skip sociality.
To conclude, the advantages of following traditional approach of educating kids outweighs education at home for children’s development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 285, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...pare the benefits for ways of education the outweigh the opinion. Since 20th Century, peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51219512195 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93764667638 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8671305205 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7142857143 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237180318109 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747305797019 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633842378708 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147986107379 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420299162153 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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