some people believe that team sports is very important for children to succeed in their career, others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable that sports are essential for development of children. Some people argue that games played in team are paramount to achieve successful career, whereas others believe that these sports have negative implications on personality and career growth of a child. I believe that although the activities performed in collaboration lead to future prospects, yet there are certain negative implications associated with these activities which must not be neglected.
Admittedly, teams sports are essential for better future prospects. The arguments to support this is a fact that youngsters learn different skills such as team management, organization, and leadership, when play together in teams. This in turn helps individuals to improve themselves as person. In other words, if a child acquires such multitude skills at early age, he will succeed in any field or career. In addition to it, team work in sports attributes critical thinking abilities in a sportsperson. Later in life, the critical reasoning helpful in coping up with different challenges of life.
On the contrary, there are advocates who disapprove that team sports foster better career. They argued that team sports take precedence over child’s education. A student could not concentrate well in studies besides carrying out sports pursuits and this ultimately left them behind their peers. Furthermore, the self-esteem of children could hurt, if they face continuous failures or not being able to outclass in any match. Consequently, lost of self-esteem would in turn has negative effects on emotional well-being of child growth.
In conclusion, I believe that team sports lead to successful future provided its negative consequences have been diminished
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59622641509 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03050586935 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4384521657 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230528408836 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766087212849 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650055654351 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135497588754 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444600301309 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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