Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that practicing the public working without money in spare time would help the youngsters build the essential skill for themselves and the society as well. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this statement.
There is no denying that supporting the community is an excellent way to teach them how to handle their time properly. The reason is they would be less dependent on the technology or portable convenient devices, which prevent their eyes from weakening etc. As a result, they would have better health, which is essential for their studying and boosting their intelligence.
Aside from that, working unpaid in society creates more wonderful values for the community. The reason is the more teenagers participate hand in hand for building community, the more social evils would disappear. Moreover, they would be open-minded about life and make more effort on their goals and dreams. Consequently, the national economy would be more strongly developed with techno-savvy workers and better than that.
To conclude, I firmly believed that taking part in public activities would help the teenagers grow in the perfect way which would have a huge influence on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70215641767 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6808812611 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147650901244 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593534926054 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226442785144 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088170249733 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217090411157 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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