Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that it is necessary for adolescents to do social work for their community as it is beneficial for both of them. I absolutely agree with this statement that children can improve their social life and community can get free service.
Firstly, children utilize their free time by serving community. They have enough time to do something after schooling hours and doing work for society makes them productive for future. Since behaviour factors like etiquettes, manners, social ethics, helping others without conditions and kindness are developed while servicing a group of people. For example, in developed countries, high school students have to do social work to pass their grades. This kind of utilization keep them away from evils since teenager stage is considered quite fragile.
Secondly, free service is affordable for communities. They get more people for getting help at no cost. As they organise services for numerous people, they do not become burden for government. For example, in Canada Salvation army, they have many students to deliver food to local people without any cost. In this way they get free assistance and student also gather a lot of knowledge about their surrounding.
To conclude it, community service in free time is the best way to spend time for betterment of community as well as him or herself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17727272727 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61999227177 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2769646978 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6153846154 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256971968099 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959348824116 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694416300204 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182116446409 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790005360531 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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