The invention of airplanes made human life much more convenient; however, it is argued that the aviation service will decline in the upcoming years. This essay will demonstrate the drawbacks of this statement, as other types of transportation are still time consuming and not as suitable as flying.
Air travelling made any journey faster and safer compared with other transports. Before airplanes, people usually travelled by train, ships, or vehicles, and trips would last hours or even days, depending on the distance. Nowadays, it is possible to cross the globe in a few hours; therefore, people have been investing their money into the tourism section because flying allowed them to reach anywhere in hours. Besides tourism, commerce also benefited from air travelling, as companies can now buy products from any part of the world and receive it in a few days, all because of air shipping. A good example is Ali Express, a Chinese company that became one of the biggest in online shopping, all because it could deliver their goods worldwide in a short period of time. Thus, the aviation service had transformed our society and it is unlikely it would stop using air travelling in the near future.
Although it is possible to presume that air travel should decrease, as it affects nature negatively, society had not yet developed any other transportation method that is more convenient than airplanes. It is important that our generation manages the use of these in order to avoid unnecessary flights, but in general, most transportations still pollute the air. For example, Kent University compared the quantity of fumes emitted by vehicles, such as cars and trucks, over planes, and discovered that aircrafts pollute 37% less, as it can transport more passengers and goods than vehicles, which means less fossil fuel will burn, because less automobiles will be on the roads.
To conclude, if we analyze the transport situation as it is today, society will still be opting for air travelling, as it is more convenient and faster than any other method of transportation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 758, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eliver their goods worldwide in a short period of time. Thus, the aviation service had transfo...
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Line 5, column 640, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun automobiles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ans less fossil fuel will burn, because less automobiles will be on the roads. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11730205279 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79086149856 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58651026393 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6894361635 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.416666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118392641114 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473979117233 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036807902446 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619419782201 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333529016896 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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