Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is a positive or negative development?
The advancement in technology has brought a number of benefits to the society and one of the advantages is Aviation. However, certain individuals have this notion that the demand of travelling by air will be reduced in future. In my opinion, I do believe that the lowering of demand of air travel will have a negative impact on the economy and society.
The reduction in the need for traveling through aircraft will be beneficial for society as an airplane consumes thousand tons of air-fuel to travel from one place to the other thus depleting the natural resources of the country. Moreover, flying through air contribute to global warming and pollution as airplanes run on kerosene fuel which when combusted releases a huge amount of carbon dioxide and other harmful gases such as carbon monoxide and nitrogen monoxide in atmosphere which destroys the thin layer of the stratosphere, causing the harmful sun rays to enter the Earth. To elucidate, a recent study reports that on an average the airplane releases more than 60 percent of harmful gases in the atmosphere thus they are the on of the main reason for environment degradation.
However, air travel has made the world a smaller place, now travelling through air to different countries saves a lot of time thus making human life much easier. Furthermore, countries that largely depend on tourism as the major source of income have been aided by convenient air travel hence, any reduction in air transport will not only affect tourist inflow adversely but also bring down the economic growth of those nations. To illustrate, Maldives, an island nation solely depends on its tourism industry and any reduction will bring down its foreign cash inflow and economy drastically.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that the disadvantage of reduction in air travel outweighs the advantages as the reduced air crafts will have a negative influence on the nations economy and growth and will even make the human life harder as they will have to spend a lot of time in travelling to other places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nd will even make the human life harder as they will have to spend a lot of time i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68501306659 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.7420842467 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.0 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264417234792 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114581313675 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917588123053 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176752228195 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729845504259 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.