It is true that some people argue that volunteer service should be a compulsory part of high school programme lie working fro a charity, developing the neighbourhood and teaching sports to children. I agree with this but this have negative and positive both side.
On the one side, this volunteer work can help students daily life which they are doing a help for social work and they can remove all kind work of problem in their ownself or others. Additionally, unpaid community service make a student honest and active which avail to get good job and respect also from their society. Moreover, as a volunteer student doing a work at a organisation and after interupt that place then they make a team snd they down for helping another people or society. Such as, mustul a volunteer organisation this organisation has many volunteer and they are doing many social work to making team. Besides, if the volunteer service has declared compulsory for part of high school then volunteers csn make their carrier easily and they learn many things which things does not know others normal life spending students.like, normal students spends their time in mobile, and other activities what has harmful their life and they could not know how to help people and how to communicate their neighbours properly it happen also work in job side.
On the other hand, student who are study in high school they do not get this subject because some time it work hard and pupils does not afford there. Along with, high school students other country studying 12 to 14 hours a day that's why they do not have much time to doing their volunteer work. For example, china high Schools students study 14 hours in a day that's why they Don't have to doing social work and can not helping charity and youngers. In additional, if this unpaid community service has been mandatory for higher school students then their after finishing their parts activities they do not get much time to study Properly other subject then they get their worst result in the exan time. Moreover,some times volunteering work calling some curse just because of their having may rank and their including many volunteer or other Students and they want to handel their work ownself that they get jealousy and bothered each other.
To sum up, volunteering work might be mendatory for a part of high school programmes it works for a charity and improving the near by people in their home and also teaching younger a spirts but it has a many good things and pupils get a good carrier and also a job besides it also have some few things which distroyed and affected badly on students life. So, we should be concern our all types of decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, such as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2220.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 466.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76394849785 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40798924445 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442060085837 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.564961993 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.571428571 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256158985174 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113254641227 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780844628578 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202962389557 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577194789427 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.