Some people believe that unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been suggested by many people that voluntary work such as, charity work, working for well-being of local communities and provide sports knowledge to children should be included in higher secondary syllabus as it will surely bring advantages to the students career. I strongly agree that it’s an excellent idea to engage young pupils to different types of charitable works for the betterment of their future life as well as for the society.
Life skills are crucial for every person as its only can achieve from experience and if it’s can be practiced from first sphere of life, it will undoubtedly enhance the chances of being successful in later part of life. By doing voluntary work students will be able to learn a plethora of life skills and they will be grown as a leader from the beginning. These skills will help them to obtain a prestigious job as their knowledge and skills will positively differentiate them from other candidates.
Apart from these, society and local communities will be greatly benefited from young people, albeit these are unpaid works. Moreover, students will remain physically fit by doing such type jobs and crime rate will be drastically fall as they will refrain from doing nothing after returning from school. In addition, after school activities will also build confidence among students which will help them in the long run of life.
In conclusion, I reckon voluntary work should be made compulsory not only in high school but also from primary school so that children can build up their leadership and life skills from the advent of their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be included in higher secondary syllabus as it will surely bring advantages to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, as for, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05992509363 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56080099758 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3485289012 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.111111111 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176534425336 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854188365856 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594506523282 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127501025364 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644594478809 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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