Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Wearings and etiquettes are two main factors depending upon different personalities particularly. Natureof a person rely on the environment in which one lives, and cultures of a nation. This essay will reveal both aspects of notion and depict my own perspective.
Forst of all, adopting local customs and behavioural environment enhances one to attain different kind of experience. Visitors learn different languages and can try different clothes, which might make them very elated in order to look adorable. For example, tourists coming in canada mostly leave wearing traditional clothes of their home countries. Thus, learning new experiences and tackling with different problem makes a person more stronger and a real struggler.
On other hand, greeting visitors with their own cultures might help the local communities to learn other cultural values and behaviours. Tourists might feel grateful in order to have a warm welcome of their native language. To illustrate, Indian people living in cities like surrey, Brampton follow their own religions and feel proud to have their religious places in western countries. Therefore, tourists feel free to communicate in their own languages as compared to learn local languages.
In conclusion, as both of the views have their own significance, but following the local customs and etiquettes help one to adopt other cultures easily. Although, behaviour changes within local surroundings, but wearings depend upon choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...g with different problem makes a person more stronger and a real struggler. On other hand,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59821428571 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85791005325 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4683932209 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210082689421 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734469390413 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688291675702 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130418163335 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589258354201 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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