Some People believe vthat managers are responsible for organizations sucess , while orhers think various features of the organization play a vital role in it. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
organizations are involved with many different factors for achieving success. there are many opinions for and against the role of managers in one side and other organization's factors on the other side in these victories. In this issue, I am going to explain both sides of these views and give my point of view.
Undoubtedly, managers in each organizations have vital role. one of the important role is making the best decisions in critical circumstances. The other one is giving motivation to employees to work hard. Creating union between staff is the other duty of each manager.
On the other hand, some people believe that there are some other factors that can play vital role in organization's success. Defenders claim that the role of each staff is important by his own. Moreover, there are many external factors such as economic conditions ofthe society, other organization’s circumstances and consumers to achieve these successes. In addition, having sufficient salaries for individual’s enthusiasm, interests of employees in their work , suitable environment ,work security and exiting mutual respect between employers and employees are recognized as an international factors.
All in all, it seems to me all these features are necessary for being successful. On the other hand, the role of managers a leader and also a conductor cannot be ignored. I believe that none of these attitudes cannot be successful lonely. Therefore, in my opinion both managers and other feature, simultaneously, are essential in organizations to achieve their goals and also being successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40562248996 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18899106302 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7358246823 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239549337702 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868036610068 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071730713014 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147654172901 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294229953758 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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