it is sometime said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
do you agree or disagree?
Youth should be got getting married before 30 years old, because some people believe that it can be worthy for them and for their society. In this essay I am going to discuss this issue and give my personal view.
When people are still single in the third decade of their life, They do not have enough energy to make their common life. In addition, they do not have enough motivate as they were younger. Similarly, they gradually will be more strict to choose their partner. When they get older, They expect more perfect criteriums from their partner. So, getting married becomes more difficult for them. Another disadvantages are about the age difference between parents and children, It will be more and more. Whereas it makes many problems such as misunderstanding and losing parents because of their old age and maybe die. I believe that one of the most demerit of late marriage is increasing moral corruption. Because single people are more free. Furthermore, they do not have any family responsibility. They might be tended to do unethical behaviors more than married people.
On the other hand, when youth get married in younger age, they do not have enough ability nor experience to accept the responsibility of common life yet. Moreover, maybe they do not have awareness for suitable choice, Perhaps their marriage leads to divorce.
Consequently, I almost agree with getting married under 30 years old, but the things should needs more attend is preparing some valid train for youth to increase their awareness to make a best decision for choose their husband. In addition, creating comfort and calmness for single people is necessary in each society to encourage them to get married.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, third, whereas, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97887323944 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54085834293 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8182797605 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1764705882 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335115328487 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108553237767 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843164608609 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23193008189 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718274428846 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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