Some people believe we need to pay higher taxes in order for the government to build population’s basic needs services. Others say government should find other means to get funds for it. What should the government do, in your opinion.
The citizen’s population is one of hot debate issues to all the governments. The governments are need to be paid taxes to build and protect their country. The taxes are important to build population for basic services which are people need.
The tax is paid for public service such as education. These public services are maintaining by governments to provide better services to citizens. For instance, good education is needed to children who will lead in the future. For good educating, schools need good curriculums and teachers which are required a lot of money. Therefore, governments would like to support all of education institutions for an average opportunity by paid taxes
In addition, another good reason is health service. Each and every residents can be benefited to use health service that provide from government. This is the most important for population to grow. Definitely, in modern time, life expectancy is longer than past. But there is always have a chance to occur bad situation. Also, if it is not safe from diseases, then people would not consider to give birth a baby.
However, government can find a measure without charge higher taxes to citizens. One good measure is that establish easy law to immigrate for new immigrants from other countires who well educated and can pay taxes in long term.
In my opinion, higher taxes are helpful in order for the government to build population’s basic need services. Nonetheless, the government can find other way to provide better services. Also all residents are given equal opportunity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...asic services which are people need. The tax is paid for public service such as ...
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Suggestion: had
...s longer than past. But there is always have a chance to occur bad situation. Also, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould not consider to give birth a baby. However, government can find a measure w...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...d other way to provide better services. Also all residents are given equal opportuni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17578125 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90185477038 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0087602119 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6111111111 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362137734195 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115407061176 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117763411902 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224099381575 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128469904321 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.