some people choose not to eat meat or fish because they believe that this is not only better for their own health but also beneficial for the world as a whole.
The fish and meat are not an option for several people to eat because they think it is better for health and the world.
health is a priority in every life so that it puts a choice not to eat meat and fish for some people because eating meat in excess can have an effect on growth, for example cholesterol, high blood pressure, while eating fish in excess can have a transition effect of mercury on the skin or flesh of fish for its consumption and the heavy metals found in fish will have a labor impact on the human body if this eating behavior is carried out regularly, for example slow brain development and interfere with fetal growth. We think this is a natural and reasonable thing for some people not to consume it because of its long-lasting effects on health and I'm sure no one would want to sacrifice their health for the sake of food.
Although, consuming fish and meat in excess has a negative impact on the life cycle of life. Among the fish that are consumed, of course there is a process of catching periodically in the open ocean which will have the effect of reducing the population of fish and marine biota as well as having an unstable impact on the growth of knowing life in the ocean so that the number of fish and other biota will decrease. However, eating meat is also the same thing. the population of animals that can be consumed is reduced either in livestock or wild animals. this will have a negative impact on the life cycle of animals and their numbers in the world. when consumed continuously the amount will decrease and the life cycle does not run and the main impact is the unstable forest environment due to lack of animals. We think this is a natural logic when some people don't want to consume it because they don't want to damage the environment.
It can be concluded that meat and fish are not the right choice for some people to consume when considering the impact on the environment and the health of the consumer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49025069638 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35703321118 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.42061281337 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.403782182 49.4020404114 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.545454545 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6363636364 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377982358519 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160888875728 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141565894916 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302857147821 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136935259275 0.056905535591 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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