some people claim that there are more disadvantages to the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
cars have now become a part of everyday transit; public using them are increasing day by day. it is stated that there are more drawbacks than benefits of owning a car. I completely agree that having a car has disadvantages than advantages. this essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
To begin with, it is felt like an honor and pride owning a four-wheeler. To talk about the choices of having a motor car people can travel at their own comfort and luxury. Commuting to long distances is hassle-free if people go in a car. A family can easily go for outing whenever they wish to plan for one. For example, Four-wheelers such as SUV's can accommodate for more than 7 people for hanging out on a party night.
On the other hand, drawbacks are noticeable and unavoidable by having an own car for every individual, this makes traffic congestion on roads. Parking becomes a plausible issue at every place they visit and moreover, these vehicles consume more energy resources which leads to depletion of the same such as petrol, diesel, and gasoline. Production of cars involves many costs and it causes damage to natural habitat by paints used to spray on cars. For instance, Companies such as Hyundai and Toyota are sued for using colors that are derived from plants.
In conclusion, I completely agree that although people are unaware of what harm they are causing to the environment and enjoying car comfort this has negative impacts that deserve attention. All men and women need to use public transport to ensure they protect environ.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86466165414 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62204772348 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.835869777 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249963839921 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967565545672 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122508093105 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158543352535 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112892344305 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.