Some people consider computers to be more of a hindrance than a help. Others believe that they have greatly increased human potential. How could computers be considered a hindrance?
Computers are extensively used these days both in personal and corporate needs. This including banks, hospital, schools, research labs, retail shops, space stations, personal use and so on. People have different views about the benefits and drawbacks of computers. But I would like to examine how could computers be considered an impediment followed by a reasonable conclusion.
To initiate with, using computers all the time in childhood is counteractive because children can lose their creativity this way. Moreover, a child who is dependent on a computer, do not learn manual calculation and uses tools for spelling and grammatical error correction. Apart from that, the health hazards that overuse of computers causes cannot be overlooked. Next, hacking is very common these days and individual's bank account, email, and websites are compromised very often only to add more misery. Digitalisation and security holes are serious concerns about people’s privacy and safety. Furthermore, some people are addicted to computers and the Internet, and they are less interested in social and outdoor activities. That is why China often arrange boot camp training for computer and internet addicted persons. This is undeniable that computers can be a hindrance for many.
In addition to this, the national security of any country could be compromised due to the over-reliance on computers. For instance, “Garry McKinnon” who was accused in March 2002 perpetrating the biggest military computer hack of all time, hacked the server of “The Pentagon” and learned about the secret of defense department of the USA. Finally, with the use of computers and the Internet, interaction with family and friends has become less personal these days than it used to be.
To conclude, I would like to say that, every technology has both positive and negative sides. It depends on the individuals whether the use of computers would be positive or negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44444444444 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98545465009 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7554810045 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256745763447 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083195697184 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752594290182 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14382842387 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481974918925 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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