Many people face turmoil during their school days, but with their age progression they turn around the tables and achieve their goals. Although I think such people fail to get what is their prerogative in early life because they lack seriousness and are deprived of resources, they understand importance of dedication towards their work as they grow older and become successful.
While pursuing primary education some pupil face first failure of their life. For instance, when firstly I got lowest grades among all other classmates in mathematics, I made my mind to master this subject. Since then I have been working hard in mathematics and as a result, I was honoured with gold medal from my university in statistics this year. Furthermore, many other students cannot make up to success as their family is not supportive enough.
However, I think, to succeed in life people must remain dedicated towards their goals. There are many people who thrive hard for their dreams even after witnessing hard failures, because they are determined to put their true efforts in something. Steve Jobs is wonderful example of this, who started his career with first failure in school and later revolutionalised entire world with mobile technology.
In conclusion, though people fail in young age being unfocused, they concentrate on their target and get through it. For this reason, if motivational subjects become part of primary education, then we may witness a greater number of success achievers.
- shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree 95
- Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product such as a cell phone or a service e g medical treatment Do you agree or disagree 58
- Many small businesses are being forced to close because they are unable to compete with multinational corporations What are the problems of this cause and how can those problems be solved 95
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business bring about the death of local communities.To what extent do you agree o 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey grow older and become successful. While pursuing primary education some pupil f...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'got the lowest'.
Suggestion: got the lowest
...heir life. For instance, when firstly I got lowest grades among all other classmates in ma...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22406639004 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69574814737 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659751037344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7709641217 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161589231415 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658649247155 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602367318672 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963474517646 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210240563785 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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