Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.
Why do you think that is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
These days, there are many people have a successful life without being properly educated, whereas schooling was a necessary factor for success in the past. In this essay, I will anticipate this phenomenon and what is needed to have a satisfying life.
To begin with, unlike the past where the school was regarded as only the best option to become successful in life, people nowadays have various paths. One good example would be the Internet platform called Youtube; many individuals bring attention from all over the world by uploading various types of videos, such as well recorded daily life, reviewing cars, or even perhaps informative lectures, thus making a profit or becoming famous. Furthermore, as the world is connected globally, many people start to get interested in the worldwide competition between sports players. Another meaning is that many students choose their career path to become an athlete rather than attending a school class. Apart from that, there are still many ways to have a happy life like being an e-sport player or perhaps a stock investor, all of which are not really required a school curriculum.
As mentioned above, we can have a successful life in various ways, but I believe that the most important thing is health. Without being physically and psychologically healthy, hard earning money or being famous is useless. Instead of enjoying life, we may suffer from disease or even fear of death.
In conclusion, school is no longer the only option to make a success in life and there are many different ways we can persue, but I believe that nothing could be compared with a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...to make a success in life and there are many different ways we can persue, but I believe that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, really, still, thus, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00367647059 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58001022218 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8264725853 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.727272727 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270186016874 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107431438242 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631528294309 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18250247817 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286657406321 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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