Some pp consider price as much import thing to consider when buying a product cell phone or a service medical treatment Do you agree or disagree

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Some pp consider price as much import thing to consider when buying a product(cell phone) or a service(medical treatment)
Do you agree or disagree?

Although there are many options to consider the best selection of products for customers these days, the price is the most important value on top of other considerations by some people. I completely agree with those people, and will explain in this essay.

To begin with, various types of products have been developed with variety and diversity by manufacturers to outcompete their rival companies, but these efforts would be useless if consumers cannot afford. For example, in order to purchase a mobile phone, a majority of buyers check the price tag at first to see that they have enough budgets to buy it, regardless of other attractive functions such as water-proof or full HD screen. If it is not sufficient, it is obvious that there are no other choices for them, except for leaving the shop. In my opinion, it seems the appropriate step of purchasing behavior prior to decide in general.

This case is also applicable to the action of buying services. Without actual money on their hand, they are not able to get medical supports or perhaps register a car insurance. Even if the use of credit cards or the after payment are accepted, many payers will definitely struggle in overwhelming debts when bills arrive. At the same time, people who put the priority on other considerations, rather than the cost, will likely to experience financial issue as well. In my personal experience, I have once obsessed to buy various types of insurance to protect all of my property and health, but it has ended up with enormous bills, which were far outweighed my monthly salary.

In conclusion, I believe that consumers should attach great importance to considering the cost in the process of buying goods or services.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, except for, for example, in conclusion, in general, such as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94137931034 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74182169495 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6283484023 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143654773252 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456534320535 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520073360623 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980226573014 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508680955 0.056905535591 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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