QUESTION. Tourism has become an important industry. This can damage traditional culture.Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.?
Although tourism is seen to possibly damage the normal lifestyles of the local tourist destination,it is also an essential activity.In my opinion,i think that tourism brings more benefits compared to any demerits it may bring.
Despite the minor drawbacks below,i believe there are significant merits tourism brings to the people in the tourist destination.Firstly, it can serve as a source of income,thereby increasing the local economy and quality of life.For example,the Sun newspaper recently reported that in 2018,that the UK economy improved drastically due to the rate at which tourist influxed the country over the past years.Secondly,another crucial benefit is the reinvestment of the income gotten from the tourism for infrastructural purposes such as medical facilities;industries;roads railway network.As a result,leads to the growth of the host country and even boosting tourism more.Thirdly,it is advantageous for creating jobs for the local people. In other words,jobs are made available to the host country in terms of transportation,accommodation and eatery places(resturants).
Admittedly,there are minor drawbacks in tourism. One of the problem is that it might cause environmental damages such as air pollution,erosion and littering the places with dirts.Therefore,this might be detrimental to the well being of the local people.Nevertheless,most tourist countries have environmental officials which ensures such problem does not happen. In addition,tourism can cause cultutal clashes.For instance,some tourists might behave in an irresponsible way,refusing to live the lifestyles or obey the cultures and traditions of the local people which could lead to cultural clashes.However, there is no evidence to support this,because local lifestyle is still valued by they tourists.
In conclusion,i will therefore argue that even though there are drawbacks of tourism,they are outweighed by the benefits of being a source of income,creating jobs and for infrastructural development which tourism can bring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.30857342911 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.179153759 49.4020404114 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.571428571 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.4285714286 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 30.7142857143 7.06120827912 435% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 73.0 5.01903807615 1454% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151934903979 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073578951157 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505604404829 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106943012651 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357772425793 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.94 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.41 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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