Some people feel that entertainers ( film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
In these days and age, entertainment has been become a crucial part of human beings to relax themselves as they live hectic work life. However, some proponent claim that entertainers are overpaid to conflict this view some experts assert that there are other jobs like teachers, doctors and scientist should be paid as high as them. I fremly believe that entertainers paid too much to Contradict this there are some obligatory jobs which should paid much.
In the present moment, film stars keep the ball rolling for day and night to fight tooth and nail. For an example, film star the legend Amita Bachhan work like horse in their elderly age apart from this he also forget there level. In addition, they bell the can for entertain people as their hard work. Moreover, entertainers entertain people; event though there are other indispensable job which are necessary for development of country.
To highlight the other claim, numerous people say that other job which contribute excessive to growth of new generation. For an instance, teacher thought the children who are future of the world as they build bright future. Furthermore, scientist also invent new technology which give durable life to people as they are paid as much as entertainers. Similarly, human beings life is saved by doctors ad people believe that doctors are like God so they have to reward excess amount.
To conclude this, entertainers do anything for recreation of people ; Although some proponent assert that it is not essential as other job. On the other hand teachers, policeman and so on do most obligatory thing which required for shine world. I fremly advocate that entertainers are overpaid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'forgets'.
Suggestion: forgets
...eir elderly age apart from this he also forget there level. In addition, they bell the...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'jobs'?
Suggestion: jobs
...nt though there are other indispensable job which are necessary for development of ...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
... much as entertainers. Similarly, human beings life is saved by doctors ad people beli...
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Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'doctors'' or 'doctor's'?
Suggestion: doctors'; doctor's
...imilarly, human beings life is saved by doctors ad people believe that doctors are like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, apart from, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07220216606 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61633470477 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1976917073 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332109715757 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11349795572 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088093713692 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198103678824 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075152683078 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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