There has been a viewpoint that utter an appropriate age for getting married is at least 21. While, there are some people who are apposed to this viewpoint. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial topic.
On the one hand, there are a lot of items which can be named as crucial things in order to have successful marriage. Among them age must be considered as the most significant thing because of having an important effect which is going to have on the level of maturity of couples. Firstly, majority of different personality features is depended on age, such as, calmness, interests and so on so forth. Secondly, people who are aged more are more experienced that can contribute to making less mistake in selection.
On the other hand, some people who are apposed to this view strongly believe that age has nothing to do with maturity because sometimes we are witnessing some people who act in an awful way in spite of being as an adult. The most important reason for that is maybe being less educated or because of their family apart from their age. However, the impact of age can not be neglected, other aspects must be managed.
In conclusion, there are a variety of ideas about an appropriate age for getting married and adapt on the above mentioned points, it seems like a good idea to be worried about different aspects rather than merely age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...age for getting married is at least 21. While, there are some people who are apposed ...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an awful way" with adverb for "awful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s we are witnessing some people who act in an awful way in spite of being as an adult. The most...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, at least, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73553719008 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52764241198 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3215434924 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.181818182 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256660320301 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960102654782 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590951393902 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144885494855 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045341293486 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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