Some people feel that the media has the strongest impact on people’s lives. Others feel that it is politicians who have the most control over the way people lives. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
The idea that whether the politician or the media is having an impact on people lives is remain a source of controversy. However, while some believe that it is the media who has a greater effect on people lives, I agree with those who feel that the politician has controlled over their way.
On the one hand, it could be argued that media is having a powerful impact on human lives in certain respects. Those who support media say that mankind is aware of not only does any new product come in the market, but they also come to know where the offers are going on in the form of advertisement which is depicted on TV or on the internet and in the newspapers. Moreover, media often makes it easy for a human to take scrupulously precaution through weather forecast, which means that people are able to recognize the likely scenario such as snow, rain, drought and floods. As a result, they tend to plan the schedule accordingly.
However, I believe that there are more arguments to suggest that politicians have profoundly control human lives. Nations economy is driven by politicians across the world. I would argue that through the yearly budget they fix the rate of petrol, oil, gas and electricity. Consequently, people have to cope with such budgets no matter how unpleasant it is. Furthermore, governments allocate money from countries citizen in the form of taxation in order to generate income which has been utilized for infrastructure facilities like on the increment of roads, hospitals, stations, and public places. If they use this money inappropriately, it will directly affect local citizen of the country by charging high taxation on different items. So, in my opinion, it is the politicians who have an influential effect on people lives.
To sum up, although people are frequently cautious for the upcoming product in the market, evolving the money in form of taxation for the development of infrastructure is utilized for public welfare. Therefore, on balance, I believe that politicians have a strong impact on human lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
... is having an impact on people lives is remain a source of controversy. However, while...
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Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'controlled'.
Suggestion: controlled
...uggest that politicians have profoundly control human lives. Nations economy is driven ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have a strong impact on human lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97971014493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81106225358 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544927536232 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3628806975 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.533333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305359800045 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105105373838 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1127463293 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206173591262 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130888168978 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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