Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person’s decision-making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Nowadays, most companies use an advertisement as a source of medium for promoting their products. While certain individuals opine that advertising has had a huge impact on one’s decision whether to buy that product or not, others belong to the school of thought that it has less or no impact. This essay will discuss both views to ascertain the best approach.
On the one hand, it is reasoned that advertisement has strongly affected on human’s mind because it seems ubiquitous nowadays. In other words, many companies pay a huge amount for frequently showing ads on the television during break time, internet by showing pop-up advert, roads in the form of billboards and newspaper. Take Apple Company as an example, who promotes their iPhone latest models on a huge scale by ads on television and the internet, so that it reaches every part of the world and their customers’ buy it. Therefore, some strongly feel that seeing regular advertising makes a huge effect on purchasing the product.
On the other hand, others believe that it has less or no impact while making a decision because of waiting for positive reviews. Most customers think that let other customers buy and use them. If the review is positive, they will look into the features and advertisement for purchase. Moreover, many believe that some companies just show a fake advertisement to attract their customer, even though their product is not successful in the market. For example, many cars companies show a fake advertisement to attract their customer by giving 5 years free servicing.
To sum up, although some feel that advertising creates a huge impact on the decision of people by showing them regularly using television and internet as a medium, other strongly hold that it has no impact as wait for positive feedback from other buyers. In my opinion, most companies are succeeded reaching their customer's mind to enable them to buy their products by spending a huge amount on advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'iPhone the latest'.
Suggestion: iPhone the latest
...mpany as an example, who promotes their iPhone latest models on a huge scale by ads on televi...
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Line 13, column 325, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind enabling'.
Suggestion: mind enabling
... are succeeded reaching their customers mind to enable them to buy their products by spending ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09756097561 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84422952351 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521341463415 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5025743635 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251009983017 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941376873513 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801019577341 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167518942869 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241664598737 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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