Some people feel that the media has the strongest impact on people’s lives. Others feel that it is politicians who have the most control over the way people lives. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
Who is controlling our lives? Is it a politician or media? Nowadays, this is a controversial topic. Some people think it is media that has the strongest influence on our lives. However, I agree with those who feel that it is politicians who have control.
On the one hand, it could be argued that the media play an important role in our day to day lives. Those who support media say that people are up to date with the help of latest news, which is broadcasted on television or printed on newspaper, around the world. In other words, not only are people addicted to starting our day while watching the news on TV, but also reading the headline of a newspaper or the internet too. Furthermore, it is said that with the advent of technology, children are able to use the internet for the education in schools or colleges, which means that they can easily access any part of educational information by just one simple click and free of cost too.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that politicians have controlled our lives in several ways. Firstly, they have full power for our movement of the economy in the form of controlling the inflation rate, an interest rate of the banks and the price of petrol and diesel. In other words, if the government increases the price of petrol and diesel, there not only will be an increase in the cost of transportation, but also an increase in the price of food too. Finally, in my opinion, the major reason that affects our lives is the proper use of funds which is collected in the form of taxation. If there is an improper utilization of the fund by the government for infrastructure or constructions of roads, bridges, schools and hospitals, then they will increase the rate of taxation for more fund; so the government should utilize the fund appropriated.
To sum up, although people live is influenced by the media with the latest news by watching them on TV or reading in the newspaper and the internet, politicians utilized the fund properly for the public welfare. Therefore, on balance, I strongly believe that it is the politicians of the nations who control our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...hat people are up to date with the help of latest news, which is broadcasted on televisio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68266666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.743835434 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8645736538 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214956348619 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919141003797 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855793190563 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171806442052 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116375626039 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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