It is no denying fact that physical activity most crucial for human begins day to day lives. However, the majority of masses play sport, when they are teenager, but they do stop physically movements when they come in elder age. I will explain they do stop movements and solution in the upcoming paragraphs.
Commenting with the most salient reason why elder people stop doing exercise. First and foremost, when masses come in old age they are do stop health activities. Since they become in health weakness and ailments. Moreover, it is clear that they are not only faced many difficult situations in life than younger people, but also they are handling the enormous responsibility for their family. Owing to they either not the proper time for health, nor do physical exercise. Ergo, due they come in dispersion condition at the time.
Furthermore, another worth considering solutions for physical excise significant for adult masses. However, nowadays it is irrefutable people are retrospect compare to the past. In addition, they are more time spend on technology equipment than do exercise. So, public media ought to enormous install video on this electronic equipment viz, mobile phone and television. It is fact that despite they will know about benefits of the health activities in living life.
To conclude, I pen down saying that exercise tremendously important for everyone life. Although, the trend of physical exercise has more worthwhile, yet we can not ignore the healing benefit for elder people by this movements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...t, when masses come in old age they are do stop health activities. Since they beco...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...the healing benefit for elder people by this movements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20564516129 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66614598574 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4582436533 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6875 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347888418545 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107767776267 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824360509214 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202353592383 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714253980993 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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