Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climates while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different preferences towards to the types of lifestyles and regions they want to have and live in. Some are in favor of living in the warm weather, while others prefer to spend their life in a cold environment. In this essay, I will analyze both schools of thought and provide my point of view in the end.
To begin with, there are various evident benefits of having a life in a warm place. First of all, the way of life in hot regions can be more active, as compared with cold regions, there are more out door activities available in hotter areas. Furthermore, inhabitants who live in hot countries have fewer concerns about clothing, whereas their counterparts in the cold areas have to wear multiple layers due to the low temperature.
On the other hand, cold climate also has its own advantages. For instance, people in cold areas have fewer health issues .It has been proven that rate of skin cancer is higher in hot nations due to the long-time exposure of sunshine. Also, snowy areas are ideal for extreme sports lovers to live in, since they will have sufficient locations to practice their skills, and they are given chance to participate in the competitions which are held multiple times during the year.
In my opinion, cold regions are suitable for people who want to avoid certain disease and people who want to enjoy their special hobbies. Otherwise, in general, it will be more enjoyable to live in warm areas; as such places provide people with more open-air events and a cushy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in general, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76981132075 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46007637932 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581132075472 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7778536173 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.909090909 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200104800995 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759864113581 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593629753736 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118371707499 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744915582625 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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