Some people think that the media (newspapers) have the right to publish details of people’s private life, while other’s think it should be controlled ? Discuss both views.
Nowadays, media has become an important part in the society and it is believed by some that the press has the right to share people’s personal details in newspaper, while others agree that news reports should be censored. In this essay, I will discuss both schools of thought and provide some suggestions.
To begin with, there is no doubt that newspaper readers can have a holistic picture of the news reports by reading the details of people’s lives. For example, without sharing individuals’ personal experience in the articles, it will be difficult to find the link between the increasing depression rate and modern lifestyle. Also, publishing private life stories of the governors is beneficial to maintain social stability, as it is an effective method to indicate their integrity and reliability, which helps them gain more trust from the society and bring the public closer to the authorities.
On the other hand, people who support putting regulations on news also have their sound reasons. First of all, they believe that media attract public attention by sensationalizing victims’ suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as the invasion of their privacy. Also, the overexposure of private life will get innocent people involved in news events and bring negative impacts on their lives. For instance, some criminals’ family members can face unfair treatments in society even thought they have never done anything inappropriate or illegal.
In conclusion, adding details of private life in news can sometimes be helpful to readers, but it also can bring some detrimental effects. The publisher would be well advised to take the consequence to individuals into account before they publish the news. In addition, alias should be used in news articles which involve personal information to protect privacy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44863013699 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99321141909 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9631432863 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.583333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332805731357 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113444131979 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651107990796 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206164855973 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637674554177 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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